[continued from earlier] Round. 2. It's much longer, and much worse than the original. Derrick being dead kills all of the tension, and also, to quote Matt from BCP, "I refuse to believe that someone who's such a great detective CAN'T FUCKING SPELL!" The plot makes no sense. The "murders" are called "The Sonic.exe murders" before ANY EVIDENCE IS FOUND. The story lies to your face multiple times, X is a terrible villain, "The Cult of X" is one of the dumbest names I've ever seen, and it makes me wish my eyes would disappear.

Description: Sprite made & used by Anauxieus || DO NOT USE WITHOUT PERMISSION || Name: Anauxieus | Species: Slime | Subspecies: Toxic Sludge | Age: N/A | Height: Usually 3 Feet | Weight: 12 lbs || "A slime with a soft spot for others of its species." || Innate Abilities: Fool's Harvest (Latches onto and starts to eat target), Sharpened Cysts (Hardens part of body, forming cysts that can cut through flesh), Puddle (Becomes a puddle and disappears), Emergence (Can appear on any surface after Puddling). | Ambient Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oMVD9yYu--M | Battle Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DAXk836S1xo | Enraged: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxXcuDAv7Ss