As for the critique, you picked your word choice in an accusatory manner. Generally you begin the conversation with an accusation, and then are followed up on what is wrong and how they can fix it. Instead, you accused them, and while you did offer them advice, you did so in a non-passive way, which is antagonising them. And why would someone follow through with someone who is seen as threatening? -Meepsworth

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