I feel like there is somethin missin from this. anyone got any suggestions on what to add?

Description: Quotes from Mix: - "I spend so much time on here that it scares me." -2022 -Sprite By Traffic (Gamer) -Used By Mix - "Pain and suffering." -2021 LORE TIEM!!111!! Gans was a normal sans from the original game UNDERTALE. That was until a player came along. this player was a "dirty hacker" and this dirty hacker liked the character sans a lot. The player decided to mess with the files of Gans. This would slowly corrupt Gans. The player was facinated by the smile and look of gans, but thought he didnt look "badass enough" to be a judge. So the player corrupted the files to give him a hole in his skull. even though all of this happened to Gans, He was surprisingly still happy and had hopes for his own future. Gans at this point of time had no Idea the player existed. He was questioning why this was happening to him and only him, but just thought nothing of it. He used to be so happy as said, but that was until the player decided to take his power too far. he would torment sans by erasing, killing, and so much more to the ones he loved. Gans became like a solitude of depression. He would travel to the Lab, the true lab, and even his basement, where there was a computer to research. He tried everything he could to figure out what had been causing this...As he did so, the player was wondering where the file of Gans went. The file of Gans had oddly disappeared off the surface of the files...the player found this odd, so the player had copied the code of Gans and entered it as a replica as Gans. Although the player though thought this would work, the File he had just duplicated would glitch out and become corrupted. Gans at that moment would have felt an indescribable pain. This is what triggered his now known as to be a "corrupted form". The duplication of his files that had corrupted him would lead him to be bugged and glitched out. Due to this, he would glitch into a location that was weird...The location was filled with nothing but ones and zeros..and something else..what he saw with those numbers shocked him. it was the Player's face. his REAL face. He could watch the player play his little "game" without the player knowing. Gans seeing what had caused him so much pain would infuriate him. Due to that, Gans had tried to reach out to the player. not by voice, of communication, but with his hand. Shocking to Gans, his hand reached through that screen. he could...FEEL the player...this person...this HACKER...he made GANS go through this...that same minute, Gans had a murderous urge. Gans would reach through the screen, killing the player. Gans promised himself something that day. He promised that he would travel through timeline and timeline and kill everyone who dare play the game UNDERTALE to hurt. This...THIS...is G A N S.