looks good so far alex but the only problems i have is the charting is too clumped together, aswell as your voice, it's a tad offbeat, why don't you record yourself saying some random things then clip some of your favorite areas and use them? -Jase

Description: -Jase (First character, David, He's the nicest. got killed and sent into the game and started helping all the other defeat sonic.exe.) (Doink, Semi Nice. Just a regular soul with a feisty tude, got killed and sent into a plushie.) (Andrea, Semi Dangerous. Not considered a sonic but prefers the name "Pinkeye", Just A Sonic that got infected with a virus that makes people turn at random times.) (Lockjaw, Dangerous. out for Human blood roaming the same forest Slenderman is seen in, He infact was not sent into the game but into the real world instead, He's a mixture of Human and Hedgehog.)