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e302c5 hrm.

e87ec5 oh yeah when they go back to Vineland they made them their own claw using wood that would be so much better

224a35 now I have to work on the gloves.... I mean I could also just be lazy and not do them..... hmmm

8c660b IT'S ALRIGHT! WE BELONG TO EACH OTHER TONIGHT, IN A WORLD THAT LOOKS FOR A FIGHT, WE GOT A DEATHWISH, CLOSING OUR EYES... IT'S ALRIGHT! WE BELONG TO EACH OTHER TONIGHT, IN A WORLD THAT LOOKS FOR A FIGHT, WE GOT A DEATHWISH, CLOSING OUR EYES... IT'S ALRIGHT! WE BELONG TO EACH OTHER TONIGHT, IN A WORLD THAT LOOKS FOR A FIGHT, WE GOT A DEATHWISH, CLOSING OUR EYES... IT'S ALRIGHT! WE BELONG TO EACH OTHER TONIGHT, IN A WORLD THAT LOOKS FOR A FIGHT, WE GOT A DEATHWISH, CLOSING OUR EYES...

e87ec5 I also think it should've went: They were winning, the horse starts winning, and then when they come back they dominate instead of it being close the entire time

8c660b SO MAKE, UP YOUR GODS, AND TAKE THEM IN! LOVE IS DEAD! AND IT'S ALRIGHT...

816c09 No problem brodi. (Time to slave away with doing poses)

e87ec5 speaking of I feel like the ending would've been better if after they were sold off jett was forced onto a team of different players and they were seemingly gonee, but then the horse and his team using dirty tricks makes most of the other members except jett ready to quit and THEN its revealed that they came back to play the game with her, and what should've happpen is after they won its revealed that they were disqualified cause y'know, not a official team but then they don't care because the real claw is the friends we made along the way and that would be a much better message

8c660b Dude i love Deathwish sooo much LIFE IT FITS YOU LIKE A GLOVE AND YOU DONT LIKE THE FIT!!

8c660b looks good to me :thumb:

e87ec5 the biggest problem is that the messages were weak, they were weak because we couldn't tell what they were trying to say, I feel this could've been fix if we got aa "Meet the team" section as soon as he joined showing off their problems and how they have no confidence, I also feel like since they made him one, they could've made the giraffe more in tune with rap culture and made him a bit more aggressive to show his spite for people trying to use him for his height, which you might think is too much for a kids movie but like, they have a freaky lizard man cmon. I also feel like since it seems the rhino is a single dad they could've made the main character and him bond over this loss, this would also make him starting a fight at the arena much more impactful and less random seeming

224a35 ugh does this work? as like a template I'm gonna change it late to make him more ghostly but right now this is what we have

8c660b i wonder how far i'd go if i didnt procrastinate-- would i even go any further at all? if i did, how much further could i go? where would i go? how far?

82056f Thanks, syl!

e302c5 bro procrastinates (i understand)

e87ec5 speaking of I figured out what could fix the movie other than the somewhat natural dialogue

8c660b nothing getting done ova here !!

e87ec5 this is a baaaaaa d reference

8c660b i am just the king of procrastination

130411 roots run deep peppy boy...

445f80 (Woah..,,,,., Xenoxx)

dd3432 Are you that afraid,,, of my comic!

130411 not annoying at all

e302c5 And DIdoes anyone mind me doing this actually. is this annoying of me

130411 my roots are gonna run deep in you in a few seconds

8c660b FUCK YOU!

dd3432 I do not understand the root of your aggression bmo

8c660b ...that's all you have to say? ...fuck you.

8c660b i'm really sorry youre feeling this way

130411 pepper im going to kill you

8c660b ....i killed someone.

8048ed ts so awesome zany peak!! ༼⁠;⁠´⁠༎ຶ⁠ ⁠۝ ⁠༎ຶ⁠༽

816c09 Probably- probably not

8c660b BECAUSE IF I TELL YOU I DID SOMETHING REALLY BAD YOURE GONNA TELL THE POLICE.

8c660b WHAT. IS. THERE. THAT I CAN'T TELL YOU?

2dc507 Do you understand the subtle themes in my genius comic syl

2dc507 goons

8c660b I ASKED YOU A QUESTION.

8c660b Is there anything i cant tell you? YOU FUCKING BITCH!

816c09 Peak

e302c5 So Come Forth, Child of Man.